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prayer_at_night ([info]prayer_at_night) wrote,
@ 2009-06-13 00:13:00

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Current location:at Alex's
Current mood: tired
Current music:P!nk - 'Cuz I Can
Entry tags:drabble, severus/harry, snarry100

Drabble - A Force More Powerful Than Death
Title: A Force More Powerful Than Death
Author: [info]prayer_at_night
Word Count: 4 x 100
Rating: G, I guess
Challenge: #165 The Locked Room
Warning: Pre-slash, many unnecessary words for not very much plot
A/N: This just wouldn't stop becoming longer and longer, refusing to come to an end... and there is not even any snarry action to make up for it! *headdesk*
Anyway... many thanks to [info]red_day_dawning for beta reading and explaining what I didn't understand.^^ ("Somehow" can be a very difficult word...^^°)



“I wish I could bring him back!”

Harry had been terribly drunk that evening and soul-crippling lonely, lamenting his woes to the patient canvas of Dumbledore’s twinkling portrait.

“If there was a way, *any* way…”

“Would you really bring him back, my boy, whatever the consequences?”

Dumbledore had studied him over the rim of his half-moon glasses, looking almost… dubiously?

There had been only one possible answer for Harry: “Yes!”

That was how he found himself deep in the bowels of the Ministry, in the middle of the night, facing the unassuming door that hid his destination: The Locked Room.




Taking one last fortifying breath, Harry breached the distance and laid both palms lightly upon the wooden surface.

He could feel the heat that had molten Sirius’ knife pulse against his fingertips, comfortably warm at first but getting increasingly hotter and somehow more threatening the harder he pushed.

When his palms began to blister, Harry gritted his teeth against the pain and pressed on.

“I just want him back. Please, I want him *back*…”

Suddenly, the heat was gone, replaced by inviting, living warmth that soothed his sore hands.

A soft click echoed around Harry and the door opened slowly.




After the Entrance Chamber’s bluish gloom Harry was blinded by the clear white light that greeted him in the No Longer Locked Room.

Blinking furiously, he took one step inside the room and was instantly embraced by the warm, pulsing light that issued a sound so heart-rendingly beautiful it reminded him of Fawkes’ song.

Letting the light lead him, Harry finally found what he was searching for: Suspended in mid-air, held up by the light itself, was Severus Snape.

Harry didn’t dare look away from the man, not even long enough to blink, for fear that he would disappear again.




With watering eyes he stared at Snape intently, watching raptly as the naked body floated downwards.

When Snape touched the ground, it was as if a spell was lifted; the light receded and Harry, released from what had felt like a Petrificus Totalus, rushed to Snape’s side, mouth opened in awe.

His hand shook uncontrollably where it hovered an inch above Snape’s chest, until Harry took a deep breath and lowered the trembling appendage.

He gasped when realization hit him in the form of Snape’s steady heartbeat: the man was painfully thin and sickly pale, but unmistakably, unbelievably, wonderfully alive.



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[info]majmunka
2009-06-13 02:45 am UTC (link)
Moaaaaaarrrrrrr, pls! :D

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-06-15 04:30 pm UTC (link)
...I'll see what I can do.^^
Thanks for the comment!:-*

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[info]mac_tunes
2009-06-13 05:36 am UTC (link)
how come you stop just there?!?!!?!??!!?

:p

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-06-15 04:37 pm UTC (link)
Well, to be honest... I didn't plan this any further. *blushes*
But, as I promised majmunka, I'll do my best and try to write a sequel.^^
Thank you for commenting!:-*

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[info]fancypantsdylan
2009-06-13 06:31 am UTC (link)
you can't just stop there, I need more, although I love what's already here ;-)

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-06-15 04:39 pm UTC (link)
Hee, glad you like it...^^
I'll try to write what happens next... once I know what will happen.^^° *hasn't thought that far*
Thank you for the comment!:-*

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(Anonymous)
2009-06-15 01:05 pm UTC (link)
Oh, wow.
amazing

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-06-15 04:39 pm UTC (link)
*blushes*
Thank you!^.^

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[info]elethian
2009-06-15 08:29 pm UTC (link)
What wonderful imagery. And I liked "No Longer Locked Room".

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-06-18 04:01 pm UTC (link)
Thank yooouuu!>///<
I'm all bouncy now because you noticed the imagery, and that is what I really like about this.^^
*hugs* Thanks again!

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[info]keyairreem
2009-06-16 03:44 pm UTC (link)
Arrggggggg! You can't stop there!!!

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-06-18 04:06 pm UTC (link)
Oh yes, I can... *laughs madly*

Seriously: I had to stop there. I was already late and wanted to post anytime this century, and I *mumbles* have no idea what happens next... >_>°
But I promise to try and write a sequel!^^
Thanks for commenting!:-*

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[info]alisanne
2009-06-18 07:07 pm UTC (link)
Oooh! Drama, drama.
Let's see if I can give you something to help you tell the rest. ;)

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-06-23 01:33 pm UTC (link)
Hee, yeah, quite uncharacteristically dramatic for me.^^°
I'm thinking (hard!^^) about a sequel (and Redemption *is* a tempting prompt^.~), but it'll take me a while; I just started working in an engeneering company and am a *little* dead when I come home.^^°
But I'll write it!^^
Thank you, by the way.^^

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[info]twistaddicted
2009-06-19 11:24 pm UTC (link)
I cannot resist adding my name to the chorus of 'we need more, more, much more'
Lovely fic - but please don't stop in the middle! lol

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[info]prayer_at_night
2009-06-23 01:36 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, dear! *smooches*
I'll try and write a sequel, I promise!^^

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