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prayer_at_night (prayer_at_night) wrote,
@ 2009-06-29 22:42:00

Current location:	home, sweet home
Current mood:	chipper
Entry tags:	drabble, neville100, severus/neville

Drabble - Golden Shower
Title: Golden Shower
Author: prayer_at_night
Pairing: Neville/Severus
Word Count: 100
Rating: R
Warnings: Worstest title ever? And, obviously, watersports. You know, "golden shower"? *hides* BUT it's not so very gruesome, I'd say. Just give it a try, please???
Challenge: #74 "Shower"
A/N: 1.) I'm late. Sorry for that. RL is being bitchy and time-consuming, and when I wanted to post yesterday there was "maintenance"...>_>
2.) Okay, so this is kind of a coming-out: Yes, I am a kinky perv.^^
3.) Thank you, red_day_dawning, for beta-reading and brain-storming for the title (though the result is my fault alone!!!!! Red never suggested this!)

„A-are you… sure?“

Standing naked in the tiled bathroom, gazing down at the man kneeling equally nude before him, Neville wasn’t sure *he* was sure.

When pale, almost transparent eyelids fluttered open to reveal mesmerizing black eyes, though, Neville suddenly knew he’d do it, and love it, simply because Severus would enjoy it.

“Absolutely.”

The deep voice, normally smooth and controlled, was rough and hitched slightly in anticipation; Neville let the sound caress him, help him relax and let go.

As the first drops of golden liquid hit Severus’ face, he *moaned*, and Neville couldn’t help but do the same.

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	torino10154 2009-06-29 05:50 pm UTC (link)
	Holy fucking hell. I love that! I know watersports aren't everyone's thing, but damn, that was hot. Great job. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	prayer_at_night 2009-06-30 09:24 am UTC (link)
	dances You have no idea how happy your comment made me.^^ Thank you!!!!! hugs (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	torino10154 2009-07-03 11:59 am UTC (link)
	Just wanted to tell you I rec'd your drabble here on snapedom. :) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	prayer_at_night 2009-07-03 04:52 pm UTC (link)
	bounces madly You are so awesome, dear!!! hugs Thank you for the lovely words; I read what you wrote on snapedom and thought "OMG, does she really mean my drabble???"^^ grins and bounces some more Thank you again!!!!! :-* (Reply to this) (Parent)

	(Anonymous) 2009-07-01 12:43 pm UTC (link)
	That was quite unexpected from such a pair, I can say =) You managed to write this iink without vulgarity, thank you. It was hot =)) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	prayer_at_night 2009-07-01 05:37 pm UTC (link)
	Hee, thank you! hugs Well, I like vulgarity sometimes, but with these two it had to be different, I think.^^ Glad you like the way it came out!:-* (Reply to this) (Parent)

	bridgetmkennitt 2009-07-01 08:28 pm UTC (link)
	Watersports! Excellent job. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	prayer_at_night 2009-07-03 04:53 pm UTC (link)
	Hee, thanks!^.^ Totally glad you like it.:-* (Reply to this) (Parent)

	alisanne 2009-07-03 02:31 am UTC (link)
	Oooh, quite unexpected and quite hot! :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	prayer_at_night 2009-07-03 04:56 pm UTC (link)
	Unexpected? Was the title too... subtle?^.~ I'm glad you like it, dear. (Especially since watersports isn't everybody's cup of tea, I'm happy to hear that you think it's quite hot.^___^) Thank you!:-* (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	alisanne 2009-07-03 05:50 pm UTC (link)
	It was the pairing, actually. I read the title but not the pairing. slaps self (Reply to this) (Parent)

	red_day_dawning 2009-07-03 12:11 pm UTC (link)
	Hey, did you see? You just got a lovely rec from torino10154 at snapedom! Congratulations. (Reply to this) (Thread)

prayer_at_night
2009-07-03 05:08 pm UTC (link)

Yeah, I saw it. (She told me herself; but thanks for nudging me, anyway!:-*)
Now I'm all happy and giggly and bouncy.^^
(Btw, I already read Belated Birthday Gifts yesterday (at work, I should add; that's why there's no comment.^^°) and was like Aaawwww!^^ 'What was that second yes for? ... Idiot.' that's so snarry! Brilliant, dear, honestly! Love it.^_^ ...Anyway, I'll go read the other snarry you wrote now.^^)

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	red_day_dawning 2009-07-03 07:06 pm UTC (link)
	Yay! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	thesewarmstars 2009-09-13 10:48 pm UTC (link)
	Okay, I avoided reading this for a long time because of the pairing, but finally gave in out of boredom, and I'm so glad I did! That was really hot. Wonderful job. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	prayer_at_night 2009-09-14 01:07 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you for giving the drabble a chance (despite the pairing;P)! I'm so glad you liked it!^-^ (Reply to this) (Parent)